Roll Tide! I enjoyed watching your video presentation. I loved the background on your blog, but it would have been nice to see some personal pictures of you and your family.
I am very sorry for your loss. Having your dad die when you were young must have been really hard on you and your family. You seem like an extremely strong person, and I admire your courage to share such a personal story.
However, I did notice quiet a few grammatical errors on the presentation. For example, on slide five, "Schooling for me.....", you misspelled "kindergarten." Perhaps you should have someone proofread your blogs before posting them in the future.
Good luck with the rest of the semester! Laura Ellenburg
Hi Jasmine!
ReplyDeleteRoll Tide! I enjoyed watching your video presentation. I loved the background on your blog, but it would have been nice to see some personal pictures of you and your family.
I am very sorry for your loss. Having your dad die when you were young must have been really hard on you and your family. You seem like an extremely strong person, and I admire your courage to share such a personal story.
However, I did notice quiet a few grammatical errors on the presentation. For example, on slide five, "Schooling for me.....", you misspelled "kindergarten." Perhaps you should have someone proofread your blogs before posting them in the future.
Good luck with the rest of the semester!
Laura Ellenburg